My Words, My World

First drafts – A few pages in the large wilderness of the world of writing

99-word fiction – The stranger

The stranger stepped in out of the rain. He wore a trench coat, hat and looked like he needed a gun. He ordered a double whisky. He removed his hat and his wet face shone with the light from the bar mirror. The old men playing poker at the corner table ignored him with straight faces. The barman cleaned glasses with a cloth. The stranger sipped his whisky.

He kept his coat on and wrapped it tighter around himself, as if he could keep the world’s evils from getting in.

Or to keep his own evils from getting out.

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3 thoughts on “99-word fiction – The stranger

  1. Hi Chris! Great atmosphere! Intriguing!! I would love to know more!

  2. Pingback: 99-word fiction: The stranger – part IV | My Words, My World

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